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Oil And Vinegar, Not Oil And Water

Since April is National Poetry Month, it seems appropriate to discuss ways in which poetry can make fiction better. Continue reading

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Transitions

Transitions are nearly invisible, or should be, whether in fiction or non-fiction. However, they serve a vital purpose. They usher the reader logically from point A to point B. They are the guideposts that make your writing clear because they … Continue reading

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Tears And Smiles

When I was a sophomore in high school, I had a history teacher who had a verbal tick — that is, he repeated a pet phrase over and over and over. Honestly, I don’t remember what it was he said … Continue reading

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Word Discrimination, Part 2

Like adverbs, adjectives receive a fair amount of discrimination from writing instructors. Sol Stein, author of Stein On Writing, has a great deal to say on the subject. In fact, he created a little writing math formula for adjectives: one … Continue reading

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Word Discrimination, Part 1

Are some words better than others? Are certain parts of speech to be shelved, or even banned from our writing? You’d think so based on some of the most highly recommended writing instruction books available. Not too long ago, an … Continue reading

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Repetition and Redundancy

At first glance, someone might think the title to this post is redundant, but these two phenomena—repetition and redundancy—are actually different and therefore I am not truly saying the same thing using different words. Indeed, the one can sometimes serve … Continue reading

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Vocabulary And Word Choice

An author’s vocabulary and word choice are closely associated, as I recently realized when reading Stephen R. Lawhead‘s newest release, The Skin Map, Book 1 of the Bright Empires series. Vocabulary is at the heart of language, and therefore, of … Continue reading

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Write Tight

I love contests. Besides reading and critique partners, contests may be the best means by which my writing has improve. For one thing, most contests give feedback, either through judges’ scoring sheets or through comments from other participants. Then too, … Continue reading

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Fresh Writing

This week at my primary blog, A Christian Worldview of Fiction, I wrote several posts about “fresh” fiction. I started out thinking of the subject primarily from the view of the story premise, but soon realized there was a lot … Continue reading

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